Editing Services: Query & First Five Pages

Queries are tough. I get it. And those first five pages? Don’t even get me started.

The good news is you don’t have to go it alone.

That’s because now you can begin (or continue!) your query adventure confidently with a critique of your query and first five pages.

As an author who’s been there and an editor with five years of experience—including as a #RevPit #10queries editor—I’ll bring an additional perspective to your query by focusing on its presentation of your concept, characters, and plot with specific, in-line edits over the course of two passes at perfecting it. Then, where the first five pages are concerned, I’ll provide feedback via Google Docs on the fulfillment of the query’s promises, along with comments on the inciting incident and more.

All of this is available to for $40.

What are you waiting for? Get in touch with me here so we can really make that query pop!

Want to go beyond your query and first five pages?

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